I saw a werewolf with a Chinese menu in his hand (a revisit to great first lyrics)

Great songs do not have to open with intriguing first lyrics. Some great songs do not have lyrics at all – Booker T and the MGs (“Green Onions”), Eric Johnson (“Cliffs of Dover”)and The Ventures (“Walk don’t run”) all had instrumental hits. But, a catchy first lyric can grab your attention.

Warren Zevon did so with these lyrics, “I saw a werewolf with a Chinese menu in his hand, walking on the streets of Soho in the rain.” This song is obviously “Werewolves of London.” What I learned yesterday is Zevon was talked into switching the first two stanzas for this purpose by Phil Everly one of the famous Everly Brothers.

Procol Harum (a great name) sang these lyrics to begin a “Whiter shade of pale,” a great song title. “We skipped the light fandango, turned cartwheels cross the floor.” You just have to listen as “the crowd called out for more.”

Known for interesting lyrics, Freddie Mercury of Queen sang, “She keeps her Moet et Chandon in her pretty cabinet, let them eat cake she says just like Marie Antoinette.” “Killer Queen” is packed with lyrics like this, as are many Queen songs.

Jimmy Webb wrote these lyrics sang so well by Glenn Campbell in “Wichita Lineman.” “I am a lineman for the county and I drive the main road, searching in the sun for another overload.” It is the daily life of man who does his job as he greatly worries about his wife who is in need of a break.

The Kinks introduced us to the enigmatic “Lola” with these lyrics. “I met her in a club down in old Soho. Where you drink champagne and it tastes just like Coca Cola. C-O-L-A Cola…” Soho is an interesting place, as it found its way into two songs herein, so it serves as a great backdrop to Lola and this young man’s encounter

Yet, the words need not be complex. Paul McCartney grabbed our attention with a simple plaintive lyric “Yesterday, when all my troubles seemed so far away.” The lyric makes you want to know what happened “Yesterday.”

Not to be outdone, John Lennon wrote “Imagine there’s no heaven, it’s easy if you try.” His lyric was so provocative, you had to listen to his point to “Imagine” a kinder world.

My favorite Joan Baez song is “Diamonds and Rust,” so here is the beginning to this wonderful song: “Well I’ll be damned, here comes your ghost again. But that’s not unusual, it’s just that the moon is full.”

And, while Elton John wrote great music, he was usually writing the music to Bernie Taupin’s interesting lyrics. Here is a taste of the opening words to “Levon:” “Levon wears his war wound like a crown, he calls his child Jesus.”

I treasure great lyrics, so I admire great song writers who coin them. Yet, the song need not start out that way. Motown coined many great lyrics, but the Motown sound started with “rhythm upfront.” That was the hook. Often, the first lyric would not start until the second measure (think the Four Tops’ “Sugar pie, honey bunch, you know that I love you. I can’t help myself, I love you and nobody else.”)

But, it was later when Marvin Gaye penned these heartfelt, and still needed words under the Motown label. “Mother, mother, there’s too many of you crying. Brother, brother, brother, there’s far too many of you dying.” This powerful song “What’s going on?” is a needed anthem.

Songs like Gaye’s are the reason lyrics move me. Let’s celebrate the music, but hear the words. I know I left out many favorites of mine. What are some of your favorites I missed?

31 thoughts on “I saw a werewolf with a Chinese menu in his hand (a revisit to great first lyrics)

  1. Note to Readers: Carole King’s songs needs their own post, but here is the opening stanza to “Will you love me tomorrow?” coined by her eventual husband and writing partner Gerry Goffin. It is an example of their seemingly effortless partnership.

    “Tonight you’re mine completely
    You give your love so sweetly
    Tonight the light of love is in your eyes
    But will you love me tomorrow?”

  2. “I met a gin-soaked bar room queen in Memphis, she tried to take me upstairs for a ride” takes some beating, I think, especially when the song also contains the lyric ‘she blew my nose and then she blew my mind” 😊

  3. OMG, I could go on all day about my favorite songs and songwriters. Jimmy Webb is an American treasure; he’s written so many masterpieces. All these others you mention are masters; having attempted some songwriting in the past, I know it ain’t as easy as these folks make it look. But the best set of lyrics I’ve heard in years is “I Can’t Make You Love Me”, performed brilliantly by Bonnie Raitt and written by Allen Shamblin and Michael Reid. The opening line: “Turn down the lights/turn down the bed/Turn down these voices inside my head”, begins one of the most heartbreaking songs I’ve ever heard.
    Oh, man, I can see a post coming on my blog soon on this subject! Sorry I went on and on.

    • No worries. We love Bonnie Raitt in this household and got to see her once. What a treat! Jimmy Webb toured small venues in tribute to Glenn Campbell when his Alzheimer’s got worse. We saw him in one and he talked about each song and his relationships. He said Campbell asked him when he was going to write him another “geography song” after Phoenix, Wichita and Galveston. Webb also wrote “Up, up and away” as he adored Marilyn McCoo of the 5th Dimension, “All I know” by Art Garfunkel and the hit “MacArthur Park.” You likely know this, but I want other readers to see that list of work.

  4. Note to Readers: I mention Jimmy Webb and expanded on his body of work in a comment to Justdrivewillyou. Art Garfunkel sang Webb’s words in this opening stanza:

    “I bruise you, you bruise me. We both bruise too easily. Too easily and we let it show. I love you and that is all I know.”

  5. Note to Readers: We love Heart in our household. Ann and Nancy Wilson penned “Dog and Butterfly with Susan Ennis. Here is their clever opening stanza:

    “There I was with the old man
    Stranded again so off I’d ran
    A young world crashing around me
    No possibilities of getting what I need
    He looked at me and smiled
    Said no, no, no, no, no child”

  6. I love music, Keith. So often I’m drawn by the rhythm of a song long before I can make out what the words are. One of my favorite opening lines is “It kills me not to know this, but I’ve all but just forgotten what the color of her eyes are or her scars and how she got them. “Savior” by Rise Against. Probably not your style of music, but I liked that line. 🙂

    • Betsy, while I am not familiar with the song, I do love the lines you shared. I recall the lyric from Elton John’s “Your song” where he is not sure of his lover’s eye color. Keith

  7. Once more you gave us such interesting background information. To be honest, when it comes to other languages I pay only limited attention to the lyrics. Some I know well, and some… you just opened my eyes to them. Btw. I love Diamonds and Rust. My father had it on a tape which he together with other songs about Diamonds he used to play over and over in his jewelry.

    • Erika, the music is key, but the words can illuminate. There is also a rhythm to the words. We have a couple of French singers on CDs and the words are so melodic. Joan Baez has such a wonderful singing voice that make the words magical. Keith

      • You are right, the words can make their own music or even ad music to the music. The lyrics do have an impact on the whole song, not only by the meaning but also as an instrument. Makes total sense to me.

  8. Great examples of standout lyrics, Keith! I have always been fascinated by bands or partnerships in which one person wrote ALL the lyrics and the others wrote none (or very few) – like Bernie Taupin for Elton John, Pye Dubois for Max Webster (his role in the band was “lyricist”) and Neil Peart for Rush.

      • Here is a great opening stanza to Rush’s “Freewill,” which has many great lines therein:

        “There are those who think that life has nothing left to chance
        A host of holy horrors to direct our aimless dance

        A planet of playthings, we dance on the strings of powers we cannot perceive
        The stars aren’t aligned or the Gods are malign, blame is better to give than receive.”

        Of course, the best line in the song comes later, “when you choose not to decide, you still have made a choice.” Keith

  9. Note to Readers: I have written before about one of my favorite singer/ songwriters, Gordon Lightfoot. His most famous song begins: “If you could read mind, love, what a tale my thoughts could tell. Just like a paperback novel, the kind the drug store sells.”

  10. Enjoyable post Keith revisiting the magic of lyrics.
    ‘Werewolves Of London’ has one of the most captivating opening lines, for the reason it is clear and coherent; grabs the listener straight away. I do like that quirky song, one of the few I can remember all the lyrics to.
    When the Moody Blues were at their height, they opened an album with a poem, by Graeme Edge and narrated by Mike Pinder. The album ‘To Our Children’s Children’s Children’ which has a space travel / evolution theme, opened with ‘Higher and higher’ and the evocative lines
    ‘Blasting, billowing, bursting forth
    With the power of ten billion butterfly sneezes
    Man with his flaming pyre
    Has conquered the wayward breezes’
    Quantifying rocket power in terms of a butterfly sneeze. The juxtae positioning of those two images just never grows old for me.

    • Roger, very cool. I was unaware of that. Although it is not at the beginning, I love the poem in “Nights in White Satin” toward the end. When they were inducted into the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame (much too later I might add), they still sounded good. Keith

      • A classic ending to an album ahead of its time, I still have my 1968 copy.
        And here’s why The Moody Blues have an important part in my life….
        From that album ‘Dedicated To Our Children’s Children’ Children’ was a song ‘Watching and Waiting’. In those years I wrote poetry, to music- one written listening to that song I sent onto a friend who past it onto to a fellow student; one Sheila Cooper, who, as a result started up a correspondence with me and in October 1973 we were married and she’s sitting next to me as I type.
        A familiar story, but one that holds true.

      • Roger, my wife and I love that story. You have a big anniversary next year. Bring her to the states and we can host a dinner. Keith

  11. Great songs you mentioned, Keith. One I always loved was “Norwegian Wood” which started out “I once had a girl, or should I say, she once had me.” Written by the incomparable John Lennon.

  12. I love so many of the songs you mention here and I have too many favorites to choose from! We love Bonnie Raitt (I’ve seen her once as well) and Queen and Warren Zevon too(LOVE Werewolves of London!). I follow a political blog and when the leader of the Oath Keepers was charged with seditious conspiracy someone at that blog posted Warren Zevon’s song Lawyers, Guns and Money. One line in particular stands out “Send lawyers, guns and money, the shit has hit the fan”. um, YEP!! And I only recently learned this part of the Queen song Killer Queen “She keeps her Moet et Chandon in her pretty cabinet” and that this is a champagne! I guess I never looked at the lyrics when the song came out. My favorite band is Los Lobos but I’m hard-pressed to note any lyrics here. A lot of my favorites of theirs are in Spanish like El Canelo and this song is a bit nonsensical. “where are you going Canelo so early in the morning? To cut lettuce for the salad.” for example. The song goes on with Canelo and his friend getting drunk(or maybe just Canelo gets drunk?) and ends with Canelo dying! It’s the music from this tune that I love, not the words in this case. I also love to try to sing along in Spanish which is tricky because the words go by so quickly! It makes me wonder who thought up the lyrics to this song 🙂

    • Toby, great adds. Zevon’s “Lawyers, Guns and Money” stands the test of time. With Queen, one has to search on the lyrics to figure out what Freddie Mercury was singing, not unlike Elton John. It is not a surprise you like Spanish songs given the number of trips there. Keith

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